Sela Locke

LotR fanfic that I couldn't get out of my head. I need comments on the story more than nitpicks about grammar and spelling. Thankee! Oh-oh, also, her name is pronounced ...

I'd really rather not nitpick, so instead, I'll give you my first impressions of your story. Okay, so first I was like, "AUGH GRAMMARPUNCTUATIONSPELLING!" And then I was like, "Augh! ...

I only read about half of the first paragraph, but I read the earlier chapters, so I have a little background to review this on. Ryder is this should-have-been-dead-a-long-time-ago-but-is-cursed-so-st

"it was his head that I didn't save Just this ONE thing I wanted to point out, Nu. I'd like this sentence better if his and I were italicized. The ...

I don't like nitpicking... so-o-o-o I'll just get right down to it. You start with a long, rather boring info-dump, four paragraphs long, to be exact. The waitresses and the ...

Sorry it's taken me so long! School and babysitting and whatnot. x-x; Nitpicks first - and be grateful, because I normally don't do them at all. ; ) Lying in ...

And personally I don't find it weird have them recapping what has happened to them. Okay, the above reviewers got pretty much everything down about the story, but I just ...

Well, she's back, for better or worse. I couldn't edit until I had feedback on the whole story anyhow. And stop asking questions that'll be answered later in the story! ...

Hallo there! I was drawn in by the interesting title, and after I'd skimmed the story, I decided to go back and point out the things I'd noticed - and ...

This is... plagiarism. Read that through, people. This title, the concept, and these certain lyrics: Trapped in the hands of fate But they just turned out the light When morning ...

Thanks, all ye faithful supporters of TLGS! I know it's been a long time since I last posted, but I trying to finish and then edit it before I put ...

AHAHAH, I'm back! -gigglesevilly- A noise like a tree branch snapping under someone's shoes disrupted the peaceful silence of the park, and she whirled around and saw a tall figure ...

You asked for my opinion, and finally, here I am! ^_^ I can't be too long - right now I'm procrastinating, and the night grows no younger. But here it ...

I don't know where you plan to set this - what century, I mean. Because, even though it has the whole 'forced-marriage-ladies-in-waiting-nobility-kings etcetc,' the dialogue and narration reminds me o

Sex. That's it. It's like Twilight, except in Twilight it's not as obvious. It's you, being doted on and kissed and perfectly 'loved' by some really hot guy. There's not ...